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Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-14-2006, 11:05 AM
#29
Jedi Religion: Jedi, Monastery of: One of the religions considered odd by the peoples of the Galaxy is the order that started 2200 years ago at the Monastery of Jedi. Named after the founder of the order, Jedi Horoni, the Monks of the order study t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-14-2006, 10:42 AM
#28
Voyage Darshan stared at the swirling of hyper-space and vented the one Hutt curse he knew, which could be literally translated as ‘your father was your mother as well’ then turned toward the cabinet to his left below the console. He opened the...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-12-2006, 4:49 PM
#26
Holani The night life in the capital was nothing much to speak of. Holani wore her red sheath, slinking down the street. On Coruscant or Corellia it would have drawn wolf whistles and propositions. At home it would have drawn shocked stares. here it...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-12-2006, 4:34 PM
#25
The Voyage Dor looked at the ship. Unlike the usual Corellian design, it was a sleek arrowhead of burnished metal. He walked across the tarmac, and ran his hand along the doorframe. The door opened with a gentle hiss, and he entered. The ship was d...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-11-2006, 1:35 AM
#24
The encyclopedia entries were interesting. I caught the 'the style is slow and smooth, forcing the mind to concentrate...' sentence used twice as well as a few comma/single quote issues, but no biggie. A critic can never get away with grammar mistake...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-10-2006, 6:25 PM
#22
The Spy The flight control officer noted the new arrival from Lortu. Only one ship this time. He smiled gently. Why would that idiot send only one ship this time? Still he tapped the button, and the military flight officer logged in. “This is app...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-10-2006, 6:18 PM
#21
Of course....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-10-2006, 2:51 PM
#19
Echana Echana: Planet located around star named Shirrazu. Galactic Reference GSFD-421/CTS/ER/9. Class: C-7 class, similar to Coruscant before urban construction. Native animals and planets graded at level 6, some dangerous, but within acceptable st...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-10-2006, 11:09 AM
#18
Food for thought kid. Maybe that explains why someone hasn't come to take Yoda's place?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-10-2006, 10:06 AM
#16
The yoda like conversation is because of a coment in the guide to the Star Wars Universe where they said no one knew what race Yoda was or planet he came from. That is why I postulated a race still in hiding. I also worked with the premise that most...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-09-2006, 3:30 PM
#12
The Monk He was tired. The cane he had carried as an affectation for 200 years was for the last five decade a necessity. He had traveled across half the galaxy to be here in this place at this time not from any solid reason. He was directed by the f...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-08-2006, 10:50 PM
#9
Cannon CANNON, HYPER-SPACE: In the millennia before the rediscovery of hyper-drive Cannon, travel between worlds was next to impossible. A vessel leaving Coruscant had to accelerate until it reached near light speeds. However since nothing in normal...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
02-17-2006, 2:24 PM
#5
I'm used to doing it on a computer in double spacing with tabs, so I hadn't really noticed. Thatks, kid....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
02-17-2006, 11:23 AM
#3
The ship “You are out of your tiny little mind Darshan.” Darshan Solo snorted as he walked. The ships around him stood like pencils laid upon their sides. At the other end of the field he saw one lifting toward space on the system drive. A pity t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
02-16-2006, 11:44 PM
#1
Picture a world where the Republic is still a distant dream, and the Jedi are not yet a force in the Galaxy. Like any fire, there needs to be a starting spark... The Blade Sogor the Tyrant was not pleased. “How many times is this?” He asked pl...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-10-2006, 10:40 AM
#203
Coruscant Entertainment center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Heart of Evil (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=160704) DarthSaboteur Set three years after KOTOR II. Two groups of unlikely heroes form to face the Sith...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-09-2006, 1:23 PM
#201
Vlad, there is a way to deal with this, though it will sound crazy. Get a note pad, and write down the dialogue you wish to use. Visualize the characters as if it were a movie. Then, act it out. Try not to do it when other people are around. Someo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-05-2006, 3:38 AM
#196
Sorry everyone. It seems I must have forgotten to post my review on friday. Consider me rebuked. Coruscant Entertainment center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Darth Insurgo - Heir To The Sith (http://www.lucasforums.com/showt...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-24-2006, 10:33 AM
#193
Coruscant Entertainment center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) The Lost Tales of Revan (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=159688) JediMaster12 Set in the period before The Phantom Menace; New revelations about the Rev...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-21-2006, 1:10 AM
#188
JK, I don't know why it did that. So just for all of you that might want to use the same excuse... i think that everybody that needs to see your email has seen it. so, as per forum rules, email addresses have been deleted from this post. just a frien...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-18-2006, 9:14 PM
#183
A note to every write on the site at present. When I started this column, my biggest worry was that the instant I started the people I had reviewed would either, A: Use the poll that I added to this and tell me to take a hike, or B: Stop writing. I...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-18-2006, 9:11 PM
#182
I'll make a deal with you, JK-707. If you'll send a full copy to my e-mail, I'll do it during this next week. Otherwise we're looking at another month....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-17-2006, 11:08 AM
#180
except for my struggling with hyperlinking, I have posted them once a week, vlad...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-17-2006, 10:49 AM
#178
I don't believe it. It worked the first effing time!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-17-2006, 10:47 AM
#177
tried putting the locations of the sites themselves in hyperlinks. Maybe it worked. Philosophy of The Force (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=159862) John Skywalker Sequel to Adventures of John Skywalker Not much has been done with the...  [Read More]
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