JAvatar80

11-19-2008, 6:32 PM
#4

I'll admit it, from the title alone I was half-expecting a pseudo-political satire/parody dealing with McCaine. Not only am I pleasantly suprised at the fact that it's not, but this is a good old-fashioned western. :D I like it alot, and am looking f... [Read More]

Posted in: Girls night out.

JAvatar80

11-14-2008, 3:56 PM
#8

Ouch Chev. I feel for you. However, I do love this drunken TSL story, and am looking forward to the continuation now. :)... [Read More]

Posted in: Family of Choice

JAvatar80

12-22-2008, 8:06 PM
#115

I did a quick google for Mandoa, Mach....and I did a simple translation of Yaim Solus... Yaim means Home Solus is each/individual/alone They brought Home Alone? o.O I didn't think the Mandalorians would like Macaulay Culkin....... [Read More]

Posted in: Family of Choice

JAvatar80

10-31-2008, 4:09 PM
#33

machievelli, this is freaking awesome! Seriously, as our local critic, I know you know good writing. I was curious to your story from that little bit of knowledge, and I have not been dissappointed. As currently serving in the armed forces, I have a... [Read More]

Posted in: Bracelets and Prose

JAvatar80

08-25-2008, 8:12 PM
#2

I like it. I won't even attempt poetry....I'm embarrassed enough just by my stories. I will admit my writing has improved since the last time I tried to write a story.....but emotional creativity is something I'm lacking.... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-27-2008, 3:10 AM
#16

Well, guys, I plan on a more thorough version of the story...pretty much a first person narritive of the whole game. ;) It will come to a similar ending, though many key points will be different. I'm just working it out in outline/rough draft/final... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-26-2008, 9:26 PM
#13

Final Ascension --~~====~~-- I climbed up the boarding ramp, already opening and pulling off my robe. I could hear the vibro-blade ignite and start cutting as Canderous started making my new seat-cover, as well as HK's sing-song style of speech as h... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-22-2008, 11:35 PM
#10

Thanks HOP. :D Like I said at the beginning, I'm a good guy, and normally play it. I just wanted to make something more of DS Revan than "blah! I'm bad! Blah, Blah!" I've got a more thorough "Dark Side Charismatic Revan" plot i... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-22-2008, 10:53 PM
#8

I do know what you mean. Like I said, though, I'm just expanding on the character in the situation, following the game. I think the reason Revan killed Carth, Mission, Jolee, Juhani, and Zalbaar in the game was because they were potential threats.... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-22-2008, 9:12 PM
#6

Part 2 ===== Bastilla silently followed me on the path back to the Hawk. After slaughtering The One and his followers, we both needed a release from the tensions building in ourselves. That act alone took close to a half hour, and then another ten m... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-22-2008, 4:25 PM
#4

Thanks guys. I'll be getting the rest up later today. HOP, I understand what you mean about the climb to the temple summit, however I'll be honest. It's been 4 years since I played the end game. I remember the major plot points, but the actual temp... [Read More]

Posted in: Darth Revan, second ascension

JAvatar80

08-21-2008, 10:31 PM
#1

Hi. I'm JAvatar80, JA for short, and this is my first fic for these forums. I've played Knights a few times, most of which were light-side games because...well...I'm a good guy. ;) However, in my Dark-side run, I found the ending to be lack luster. R... [Read More]

Posted in: Burnsey's Art

JAvatar80

09-06-2008, 6:19 PM
#47

I like ze Atton, Burnseyy. :D And I agree...Atton just doesn't look good in robes. He and Disciple don't need matching outfits. ;) I do like this Atton...kinda like Star Wars meets Cowboy Bebop.... [Read More]

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